Q:Is it fair...
To wake a peaceful dream,
To muddle a crystal stream,
To crush a lil' child's hope,
To let go off the end of rope
A:No, never!
Q:Is it fair...
To lie there, where you fell,
To blame someone as well,
To keep urself off the guilt,
To burn the bridges someone built
To wake a peaceful dream,
To muddle a crystal stream,
To crush a lil' child's hope,
To let go off the end of rope
A:No, never!
Q:Is it fair...
To lie there, where you fell,
To blame someone as well,
To keep urself off the guilt,
To burn the bridges someone built
A: Get up and put off the fire...
Is it fair...
To get rid of the worst,
To stand 'n' shake off the dust,
To see the child within,
To dream 'n' hope again..
A: Yes, yes that's my desire
Q&A by Me, Myself and "I AM" :)
great post jency.....has lots of meaning to it...
ReplyDelete@sharmi: thanks da!
ReplyDeleteEnnala Mudiyala!
ReplyDeleteAmazing poem Jency!! I wouldn't be surprised if you told "I copied this from William Wordsworth" ;) (Konjam build up overoo? but it was very very good).
aana, the second answer konjam puriyala... why did it answer only the last line? idhu mokka kelvi nu ennaku theriyum, but please explain... am I missing something here (other than a proper brain)?
@amudhan: analum neenga romba nallavaru, eppadi eludhunalum appreciate panreenga ;) For the second Q, the A is comprehensive, i said abt falling in the first line, "To lay there, where you fell," so answer to it is "Get up", also this means taking responsibility for ur own actions instead of blaming someone else which answers the next two lines as well:), purinjika konjam kashtam dhan! its difficult to follow one's thots, hope i was clear...
ReplyDeleteAWESOME! AWESOME! AWESOME! Seriously!!! I really agree with Amudhan that I woulnt be surprised if you told you took it from Wordsworth. In fact, I was in half a mind to google it myself. It is seriously good! You should definitely consider sending this for publication to some website. Plz do..trust me, it is very good.
ReplyDelete@sindu: :D am really on cloud nine! thanks for all ur encouragement! let me check for the oppurtunities and do so...
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