~Waves~ of~ Time~
~Rolling~ past~ my~ feet~
~Gently~touching~my~Soul~
...........................................~They~sing~a~New~Song~
...........................................~Every~time~they~rise~
...........................................~To~Fill~me~'n'~Make~me~Whole~
~The~Waves~taught~me~their~Song~
~And~Asked~me~to~Praise~
~their~Maker~as~well~as~Mine~
...........................................~I~sang~their~Song~
...........................................~And~His~Praise~
...........................................~For~the~Life~where~His~Goodness~shine~
~Now~the~Waves~ go~ back~
~Saying~ Goodbye~
~Waving~their~lathery~foam~
...........................................~I~pick~up~the~Shells~c@c@c@~
...........................................~Left~by~them~
...........................................~On~their~way~back~Home~
~Holding~ them~ on~ My ~Palm~
~I~Smile~ to~ Myself~
~Thinking~that~it~wont~be~long
...........................................~When~ New ~Waves ~come~
...........................................~Tossed~by~Time~
...........................................~With~yet~another~Sweet~New~Song~
P.S.:This Song is dedicated to all my old 'n' new friends and the changing times!
Jency,
ReplyDeleteThe first thing I see when I come across a poem is to look at the rhyming words (for Tamizh in the beginning and in English in the end) and if it is not rhyming, my lame brain can't appreciate the poem...
Your poem is rhyming and it is soo awesome and cute. In fact, very very cute! Good one!!
there.. there.. :)
ReplyDeleteExcellent composition jency!!
ReplyDeleteNice poem in wave format :)
ReplyDeleteI can understand some lines wave means experience and some means people.
I dont understand the waves which taught you to praise.Is they mean the ones who taught you to sing and worship the maker.
@amudhan: As usual,thanks for the quick review!
ReplyDelete@shailu: ;) u got it??? i think the poem closely relates to u :P
@vinod: thanks Vinod!
@gawaskar: :) All the while, waves mean the friends, the experience or more wholly the memories are the sea shells, the waves/friends teach me different aspects of life thru which I learn to praise the creator for the subtle learnings he gives to us through good as well as not so good friends :) romba overa irukko??
Loved it!
ReplyDelete@puts: thanks ra!
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